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首段:

引题,表明立场,4-6 60-90

第二段:

主题句,细节,总结句 6-10 90-120

过渡段,承二启三

第三段:

主题句,细节,再叙述本段主题 6-1090-120

第四段:

主题句,细节,再述主题           4-6 60-90      

 

末端:

让步

总结,3-5行,45 – 75

 

1. Comparing with people who live in city, people who live in rural area is a better way to take care of families, do you agree?

首段:

背景知识式:

Along with the rapid development of society and urbanization, especially the city supply a variety of chances and challenges, more and more people are willing to live in big city for their colorful life with their families. However, others insist on living in rural area which can enjoy a relax life. With every situation taken into account, I strongly support that living in a city should be a better way to take care of families. (75)

 

排比反问式:

Have you ever dreamed to earn a lot of money for traveling around the world with your families? Have you ever sent your children to study at an international school where they can meet with foreign students in order to cooperate with them? And have your parents ever received free medicine treatment in the hospital?

If you have never had such experience, you would never know how much happiness living in city could bring you and your families. (73)

第二段:

The city is flooded with all kinds of job opportunities, from which people could easily earn money. Not only do people can study practical skill from job, but they can support family’s everyday spending with incomings. Taking my classmate James He as an example, he decided to struggle in Shanghai for his dream after graduation. What he good at is software programming and artifact intelligence, which attracted the interests of a large number big companies. Now he is working for a company named Covidien, which focus on medical robot technology. Now his salary is appreciable, which can support all his family housing and healthcare spending. And he told me that he couldn’t even find a job if he went back to his hometown, a rural area. We can see what an important chance that the city could give us! (140)

 

过渡段

In China, the first priority matter for a man is to earn money, and then, what they care next is their children education. (22)

 

第三段:

General speaking, quality of education in the school which was located in city is better than rural area, who living in city could receive much better chance education and have more opportunities to enter into Chinese top one hundred universities. A large number of excellent and experienced teachers, local people and foreigners, are working for these schools, which have fancy resources of education for students, including cutting-edge facilities in lab, countless books in library, as well as various interest groups. All advantages attract the people migrate to living in city, who desire to give their next-generation a good education environment. (99)

 

 

第四段:

The last but not the least, people could receive safe insurance and good medicine treatment in city. This point is significant for the old. The health condition of the senior citizen is unstable. However my grandmother living in city could do health checking every year, which could prevent and cure the illness in time.

 

末段:

Without doubtpeople living in rural area do have certain benefits. They can breathe fresh air, live closer to the natural environment, and stay with a little pressure, whereas living in city has more valuable merits, easy to find a job, receiving high education, as well as receiving advanced medicine treatment. Therefore, I strengthen my point view to choose city as my final choice. (63)

 

 

 

2. When people need to discuss upsetting or controversial problems with others, some people prefer to use e-mail or text message, others lie to use telephone or voice messaging. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to support your answer.

1. clearly clarify the issue of product by adding image and will get a satisfy result.

Complex issues often deserve careful thinking.

2. control emotion. conflict

3. may contact with high level people in a company

 

首段:

背景知识式:

 

排比反问式:

Have you ever realized that it’s fairly difficult to discuss a controversial question with others through telephone? Have you ever conflicted with others when you talk with them? And have you ever found that you lost reasons and last result for an upsetting discussion when you need it?

If you have ever had such experience, you would never know how much ease and effectiveness discussing with others via text format, e-mail or text message.

第二段:

主题句,细节,总结句 6-10 90-120

First of all, by using text format medium to discuss, especially e-mail, people could clarify the controversial issue in detail they met, attaching with verifiable investigation and credible evidence if necessary

过渡段:

With making your reasons and arguments reasonable, and then, what people should care next is avoiding conflict when they face a problem.

第三段:

主题句,细节,再叙述本段主题 6-1090-120

Fortunately, according to a socialism research, comparing with discussing with others about an upsetting issue, people, discussing via email, can easily control their emotion better.

 

第四段:

主题句,细节,再述主题           4-6 60-90      

The last but not the least, text format discussion, email and text message, could be a backup document for further using.

 

末端:

让步

总结,3-5行,45 – 75

 

3. Do you agree or disagree with following statement: Two people can become good friends even if one of them has much more money than the other. Use specific reason and example to endorse your answer.

Exponent

1.       Social circle: expand social circle, people had better make more friends, no matter rich or poor, male or female, old or young.

2.       True friends can absolutely help his poor friends find a good job, do his own business, which can strength the friendship.

Opponent

1.       Social circle. The rich will spend more time to build their social circle, and inevitably ignore his poor friends. No time. Not cross of their social circle. Activity, Hobby, topic

2.  Different world outlook, value, taste result in conflict.

3.  With chasing some specific purposes, like money, power and so forth, some poor people may change their personality and characteristics in order to cater for the rich and make friends with them. All these behaviors people performed is cheating and couldn’t find true friends.

 


4. Do you agree or disagree with following statement? In a team, those who do not accept other’s criticism cannot succeed. Use specific reasons to support your answer.

 

Have you ever carefully read biographies of famous succeeded people, for example Bill Gates, who is the richest people all over the world, the founder of Microsoft Corporation, which released several magnificent products, including Microsoft Windows operation system, Microsoft Office Suite and so forth. Admittedly, all these products play an important role in improving computer informatics, which also make him to be a succeeded businessman in the 21st century. However, no one would have known what Microsoft would be if he hadn’t accepted user’s criticism when he designed Windows.

 

1. After listening and analyzing others’ criticism, one could improve his performance..

2. Positively facing criticism would be a practical way to cultivate one’s optimistic attitude.

3. One would feel confident when others accept his comment or criticism. Aspect, teamwork

 

5. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Since people care public recognition more than money, they will work harder to obtain public recognition even though there is no more money given.

Are you willing to sing, teach in village?

1. Dream come true. With his unyielding perseverance, the spirit of never give up, he realize his dream of to be a singer/singing.

2. it’s meaningful to dedicating all his life to education instead of earning high salary in company.

3. If someone has obtained public recognition, happy, wide social circle. He will have a good quality with little money.

 

6. Comparing with other characteristics, good communication skills are the most important for a person’s success.

Recently, people are discussing which skills are the most important for a person

People will meet all kinds of problems everyday when working; some people will resolve it with optimistic attitude, others will be frustrate and give up. At last, the people who hold the positive attitude will get promotion or run his own business, the people who hold the pessimistic attitude may lose his confidence or lose his job. I, as an opponent, definitely support that we should never give up while doing everything.

 

Scientist should never give up when they are inventing new things.

Creating a new thing from scratch is a painstaking and time-consuming task for scientist.

Edison invented the light bulbs after trying one thousand and six hundred materials.

 

Students should never give up when they are studying some difficult curriculums.

College entrance exam.

 

People should never give up chasing his happiness. I believe that it’s happy that people can find his true love. One can bravely express his love to the other by several ways, such as face-to-face, email, TV show. After that, one can know whether he can fall in love with another one. Unfortunately, sociologist said that most people couldn’t succeed after his first expressing by analyzing statistics. My girlfriend. Give up, or keep moving forword.

 

7. Parents should allow their children to make mistakes, and let them learn from their own mistakes.

1. Mistakes children once made would be a profound and positive lesson for them.

2. It is difficult to obtain the so called sense of accomplishment  when they only follow parents' decisions. Confident

3. Cultivate the sense of responsibility for him. Undertake serious consequences the mistake brings.

 

8. Should the school children should be limited on TV program or movie?

-  is lack of self-discipline

-  study

- take exercise

9. Parents should encourage their children to do their schoolwork independently rather than help children to do their schoolwork.

 

The trend in schools today is for parents to be involved with their children’s schooling.  However, what role should you play in your child’s homework? 

 

http://essay.chatscience.net/674/university-professors-should-research-educating-students

1. Children will lose independent minds of their own because their parents help them with their school work. A national survey of school district policies showed that schools most often recommend that parents play a supportive role rather than a teaching role.  The purpose of homework is usually to give students a chance to practice skills already taught in school.  You should not have to tutor your child or help him complete his homework.  Helping your child do homework may increase his dependency on you.  Your goal should be to provide your child with the support he needs to complete his homework on his own. 

 

2. Parents should know how to you can provide your child with support if when they dont want to finish home work. Talk with teacher. Create a daily and weekly reward menu. Model Learning

3. Cultivate children confidence.

 

10. University professors should spend more time doing research or educating students.

1. The primary and significant task for professor in University is teaching. Not only, but also.

Take my university as an example

Just imagine what would be like if all those university professors spend more time on doing research and ignore the education task, in the future there would not exists successful scientists since unqualified education on universities.

2. What’s more, the professor could find some qualified student to assist him to do research .

3. Get familiar with student and get feed back from student

 

11. There is never a reason for people to be rude to another person.

1. Polite attitude can avoid conflict. On the contrary, impolite or rude attitude will cause big trouble.

2. be polite to everyone could help government build harmonious society, from which everyone could get benefit.

3. Sometimes, people will get surprising result when they speak with other in a polite way.

 

12. The challenge dream or reality dream

1. Live in life. Earn money

2. Happiness

3. It’s hard to realize the challenge and tire. Bad for health

 

13. Nowadays people spend more and more money on pets

1. Love pets. Companion. Alone spiritual support

2. Assist people, seeing-eye dog, sheep dog, police dog, gate keeper.

3. Protect animal from be killed.

 

14. College should offer students a better job preparation before they start working.

1. The top priority is to find a job. Customize your resume, find company

2. Reputation. Financial good

3. Let the company find the best and most suitable employee.

 

15. People now are easier to be educated than in the past

 

1. More opportunities for student to enter into university

2. More and more resource you can find in the Internet.

3. More and more professional training organization.  well-educated people around you, you ca

 

16. Family support and government support

1. Fundamental infrastructure construction. Hospital, park

2. Draw up and define common policy

3. Protect your benefit and your family when the war broke out

 

18. Grandparents and grandchildren

1. No knowledge

2. Old Idea

3.

1. Experience each grandparent must have his or her own inspiring stories of success, or even sad stories of failure in life, and these are much more vivid and direct lessons for grandchildren to learn from.

 

However, after carefully deliberating this issue, I endorse that the 

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